my favorite day of weekend

There is alot of day I like, but my favorite day of the weekend is Saturday.Saturday is my favorite because I can rest and watch wrestling.I can also go to play with my family and that is my favorite day of weekend

why is family important to me

Family is very important to me because they love me and share thing with me.My family also help me alot.My brother and my sister are always smile with me.If my life don't have a family is so sad because I'm lonely and no one help me so my family is really important

feedback sandwich

make the picture colorful
talk more information
face to the audience

goal improvement

next time I have to write more details about me. I have to talk about me more to everyone.I need to speak loudly to the audience.